Last of the American Girls - Comments

Great place to end the chapter! I can't wait for the next!
And a great start to a chapter, too. I had to double back and check the last update to make sure I hadn't missed the sequencing to having him in her bed!
Of course it wasn't real, ahaa! <3

I can always imagine Billie doing the stuff you describe and that's possibly my favourite thing about this story. Update!

Just love this story. And I just love Bristol. Update soon I hope?

GingerCrunch beat me to it, but I liked his POV! You should consider doing it somewhat regularly, if not very often.
In most of my chaptered writing, I like to switch perspectives because it really helps readers to see every angle of a situation while still getting the intimacy of first-person.
And about Adrienne...I am so the exact same.
I think I'd do it anyway, because I'm just like that, but it'd probably take me -like- three hours just to decide whether or not to do it and then another three hours just to write it.
Ahaa!
Keep it up, girl! (:

Nah, totally not ridiculous, I'd definitely do the same. Adrienne is such an inspiration. It was cool to see Bristol from a different aspect as well.

I love this chapter. Bristol is a really unique character because not only is she the total opposite of the typical girls I read about but she's got a big family, which in itself is really special. It was cool to have a back story for Billie and see him interact with her little siblings as well. Update soon!

So I read this chapter and died. It was so perfect.
And just so you know, I'm one of those readers who comments after like...every chapter, so be ready. (-;
I love Billie's enthusiam and the realism of Bristol's character. She's very believable and, that, to me is really important.
You've got a knack for writing, and I've loved this from the start! I can't wait for more!
I also laughed out loud when she called him Samuel. I'm so used to Sam. I loved it so much, you don't even know.
Ahh! I could just keep going on what I love about this, but I won't because that would be crazy.
I miss all the Bs! I'm not kidding either. It's more realistic for everyone's name to start with a different letter, but I mean...my entire family has names that start with R on purpose. I love alliteration in names. I hope you didn't think I was being sassy when I pointed it out to you. ):

Bristol is so awesome. Plus I love her name. And the layout, which is totally awesome! Update soon!

She's so cute!
I adore Bristol.
So much.
You don't even know.

Thanks for all the love nerdglasses, Gingercrunch, & Shirtless!! =]

Oh god.. this is so exciting. I love it. Please keep writing!

Well then. I'm reading heaps of BJA fics at the moment and none of them are quite as unique as yours! It's cool to see something different and I hope you keep it up :)

Gah this is the first BJA fic I've read in awhile and it's bringing back memories of how obsessed I used to be with that boy.

I'm enjoying this story very much. Thanks for taking what I said into consideration. You're doing awesome and I can't wait for the next chapter. :)

@ shirtless
Absolutely. I'm in still learning just how to use this site, so it may take some time for it to really look right lol

This is a great fic that seems like it's going places
But could you put breaks between the paragraphs? c: it'd make it a lot easier to read.

Kinda cute with all the Bs. (:
Y'know...
Ben, Bristol, Brittany and a soon to be Billie.