Hitting the Showers - Comments

your last lines were something like in the weight room or the pool..........watevs

u need to make new chapters about those scenarios..........you ight even get more readers and stars!!

i would definately read this again!

That was awsome you should add more...

Ah, that was hot
I enjoyed it

can you please write more? ;]
i love it and so does my friend, Lisa [she's sitting next to me].
she isnt gay or bi, but she will be ;]

Great.
Could have more paragraphs and also there was a few typos.

:) ahhh, so you posted something!
its really good, though it could do with
more paragraphs because without
them its quite hard to read the chunk
of text.

great.