Somewhere Only We Know - Comments

*thumbs up*

Great ending and I love that it is a happy one :) really loved both stories!!!

Oh my gosh!!! Yay!!!! Seriously smiling so much right now :D can't wait for more!!! Can't believe it's almost over!!!

Another great chapter!!! Hopefully Lex and Jeremy will get close again. And poor Olivia :( looking forward to more!!

Great chapter :) how annoying was that kid!!! Looking forward to more :) hope Olivia is going to get better!!

Alexa is back. Great update!! Hopefully things will maybe happen with these two now...I don't know. I'm excited :) looking forward to more!!

Wow I did not think it was going to be that bad for her. Just wow!!! And I'm looking forward to seeing Alexa coming back...should be interesting!!

Hey guys... PLEASE do me a solid and check out "The Boy From Hot Ice" and tell me your honest opinion on it. Thanks! =-)

Loving ths chapter..... Cannot wait the suspense is killing me....

Really emotional chapter but I loved it!!! Glad they are connecting :) looking forward to more :)

It's out now! It's called "Three's my lucky number." And please check out "The boy from hot ice" and let me know what you think!"

What a great chapter the fishing trip. I cannot wait for your Jem one shot.

Good chapter :) at least Riley seems like a good guy :) looking forward to more!!!

Omg people..this is FICTION... We don't know renner and yes In his interviews he has morals, but again THIS IS FICTION... And if She wants to paint this fictional character a bit whimsy, a bit nasty, a bit whatever, so be it... I am enjoying this story...

Girlfriend I say keep writing your story the way you are as it is a good story filled with all types of emotions.....

And just in case it wasn't clear, Alexa and Jeremy weren't together after Olivia was born, but Jeremy was still a part of their lives until he met the other woman. But like I said, I will explain better soon in the story.

I follow your page! I'm Renntastic!
And yes, as it says in the intro to this story, Jeremy ended up getting involved with a woman who tore him from Alexa and Olivia, but I will get into that more later.

For some reason I did think the plot was based on sonni. In the first part, the ending was Alexa leaving him. Now there is a women that made him leave? Good story. LOL, thought Alexa character was based on Sonni. I have a tumblr page rennerbaby with media photos dating from 2011-2013, she is underated. On the page you will see she was spoleswomen for Jaide clothing line. dying to see how this is going. god job

I understand where you're coming from. I think the point that I wanted to make was that Alexa chose to let Jeremy be the father in Olivia's life because she trusted him and knew Stewart wanted no part of it anyway, and if she opened the letter, she was afraid Jeremy would stay out of obligation. So she chose to have a father in Olivia's life who was there out of love rather than obligation. Yes, in real life, he's a stand-up guy, very moralistic. And he is in this story too, but in a different way. I feel it will show more later on in the story. I feel like I'm feeling rushed and pressured to turn out a chapter or two a day like I did with the last fic. This time around I am going to try to take my time so I can turn out stronger chapters. Like I said, I really do think it will get better, I'm just having a hard time getting this story line started. It's in my head, but putting it in words is proving itself to be something of a challenge. Thank you so much for giving me some points to work on. I will definitely use that to influence my story.

Contradictions....Alexa wanted the baby to know her father in life. Due to the fact that she never knew her's that was a major part of the first sequel and now Jeremy again is being portrayed as whimpy. Anyone who follows his interviews knows he is very moralistic. You mean in all these years he had been alone and lets his daughter swear, I do not like the way Olivia was introduced, stealing money the first time she meets him.

I will definitely be mentioning both how Alexa reacted to Jeremy's leaving (I think I've thrown around a few hints in the story already as to how she was changed by it), and the woman who took Jeremy away. Jeremy and Olivia are going to get to a point very soon when they really open up to each other, and that's when the story will really take off. So glad you guys are liking it. You're the best!