The Scars on Your Heart - Comments, page 4

all time kings ;3 (100)

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it's NOT "shittily written" it's perfect.!!

July 25th, 2013 at 09:24pm

CallMeKael (100)

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ASDFGHJKL THIS WAS PERFECT :D

July 23rd, 2013 at 07:54pm

TheStalkingZombie (100)

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OMG I fucking love this~ can't wait for the next chapter!! <3

July 23rd, 2013 at 01:51pm

jesca (100)

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Man you don't know how much I love the bully likes the person they bully thing. This is awsome can't wait for more!

July 23rd, 2013 at 06:19am

RachelCantFly (100)

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OH MY GOD JOSH KISSED HIM!!!
HE KISSED HIM!!
JOSH
KISSED
OLI
ASDFGHJKLDGKP THANK YOU SWEET BABY JESUS
afgbkhfujpkv I loved that chapter omg <3 but josh has a secret soft side aww

July 23rd, 2013 at 06:04am

whatthefun (100)

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asdfghjkl one of my two fav Fransykes fics omfg

July 23rd, 2013 at 05:45am

jesca (100)

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Man you don't know how much I love the bully likes the person they bully thing. This is awsome can't wait for more!

July 23rd, 2013 at 05:22am

invisiblebvbnmcrfan1 (100)

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this is really good, cant wait for the next chapter :D

July 23rd, 2013 at 02:01am

Anne Ashes (100)

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OMG THE KISSED,FINALLY!!

July 23rd, 2013 at 01:29am

jesca (100)

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Aww poor Oli I feel so bad for him. Loved the chapter though

July 21st, 2013 at 07:34am

whatthefun (100)

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Omfg this is so good! Can't wait for the next update!

July 21st, 2013 at 03:39am

RachelCantFly (100)

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AWW JOSH YOU'RE GETTIBG A SOFT SPOT FOR OLI!!! <3

July 21st, 2013 at 02:34am

fransykes (100)

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@ kickthepj
thanks for the advice :D i'll remember that next time.

July 18th, 2013 at 07:07pm

kickthepj (100)

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ufjakshf this is actually better than i expected it to be. a word of advice though maybe possibly???? you may have spaced your paragraphs if you wrote this somewhere else, but once you copy and paste it onto mibba, all of the spacing goes away, along with any formatting like italics or something that you may have used. just a little tip to add the spaces in between paragraphs/lines at the very least, it makes the whole story look more presentable and easier to read. ily ok keep writing this is gr8 c:

July 18th, 2013 at 05:48am