Oh my gosh, I am obsessed with this story! I love Ara and her relationship with everyone. It's way too cute! Her and Derek are perfect <3 I love your storyline! I can't wait for the next update!
I love Kiara and the relationship she has with the pack. I about melted on the spot when Isaac and everyone else called her mom. It was a sweet way to end a somewhat tense chapter, with the twins visiting. I'm pretty pissed at Derek though, like just why did he have to be such a dick to her in the past. Well anyway I love this story.
I am digging this and Derek is forever pressed as hell lol. I loved that you have a WOC which is always hard to find on this site, I can't wait for more!