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  • Loudness War

    Loudness War (100)

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    Thank you! I really appreciate all your comments on my stories.
    July 18th, 2013 at 05:43pm
  • capheus

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    LOL so I guess to start i've got to say I absolutely adore the summary. lmfao The spin on the sugar, spice and everything nice thing is great, I've always thought of other words for it but yours are great. XD Made me laugh and want to read the story right away. c:

    Is the background tie-dye? If it's relevant to the story then that will be cool, if not, a change perhaps? Who knows, we'll see I guess. c:

    Awh oh my gosh, my favorite line would have to be, There are many like Scot, but he is my Scot. that's so cute. I love it so much. Is tingling supposed to be tickling? Who knows, I think both work. Anyhow, I love how you ended this and I am so ready to read more. I love your writing so much, if you didn't know from my constant fangirling. lmfao Keep it up.
    July 18th, 2013 at 06:06am
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