Wow. I adore this already. I LOVE how easily you transitioned through the two chapters and the pace of the work is perfect. You're not moving too quickly or too slowly. The tone for Desmond and Emma differ with just the right amount of uniqueness without taking away from your tone and you are fabulous with dialogue and description! Kudos to you, my friend! I will certainly be subscribing and recommending!
December 12th, 2014 at 05:02am