The Sound of the Soil Hitting the Casket - Comments

The beginning was a little confusing for me with the characters,but eventually I figured it out. Probably the first story in awhile to make me actually cry, Bravo to you! You did a great job on this one.

Hi! I was brought her from comment swap! I'm going to tell you about what I think of your story and stuff! First, the story is really good. It's sad and interesting at the same time! The only problem I have is with your layout. The content box is sooo narrow! Also, when I first saw how long your chapter was, I didn't want to read it. I thought I would be bored after reading so much! So, I think you might want to cut down your chapters. It would help A LOT and it would be more convenient for the readers. Other then that, this story was very very good and I hope you take my advice! Continue to write please! :D

That was extremely sad and haunting and beautiful. I loved it!