AWE HARRY IS SO PERFECT, CAN HE KISS MY CHEEK, PLEASE??? hahaha. This was an adorable chapter, especially with Brooklyn's sister. I hope their relationship progresses and ah, I love it!! Update soon, oxox.
This chapter was soooo cute. I love Harry and Brooklyn, honestly. I love their dinner "date". I though it was cool how the both of them handle the paps, she takes it well. And omg her littler sister, Bridget, seem like the cutest thing! I am excited to know what is going to happen, because, they're getting close, I mean her mom invited him in, they went to dinner, and AH the cuteness, I am so excited for this story<3.
The only thing I found wrong with this grammatically were the repeats: I stare at him, my eyes wide with confusion as I stare at my boyfriend of three and a half years.[\i]
I do it, too, sometimes when I'm not thinking. x) That's really only the negative thing I have to say.
I'm actually shocked, though, but I feel quite good. I'm your first comment. I took the story's comment virginity ;D Yeah, that sounded so much better in my head, aha. Anyway, I'm excited for you to write this just as you are to write it. I'm kind of curious to see how all of this unfolds. It really seems like Harry genuinely loves her so he better have a good damn reason for doing this. Lol.
I hope Brooklyn doesn't relapse, though, seeing as how Harry helped her with cutting and now he's not there..temptation would be there. Anyway, great start. I can't wait for more!(: