Clarity - Comments

wow, it's been a while. anyway, i liked the update as usual!!

i'm so glad you updated this!!! it's been along time since the last update! update soon please!

I love it! I'm sorry it took so long for me to comment! But this is so cute. Update soon, please. :D

AWE HARRY IS SO PERFECT, CAN HE KISS MY CHEEK, PLEASE??? hahaha. This was an adorable chapter, especially with Brooklyn's sister. I hope their relationship progresses and ah, I love it!! Update soon, oxox.

Harry's interaction with the fans was so cute!! I loved seeing him so humble and getting along with Brooklyn's family so well! More updates, please

I like, I like! :D update soon <3

HARRY IS JUST TOO PRECIOUS. AND THEY'RE SO CUTE TOGETHER. love it, update soon! :)

This chapter was soooo cute. I love Harry and Brooklyn, honestly. I love their dinner "date". I though it was cool how the both of them handle the paps, she takes it well. And omg her littler sister, Bridget, seem like the cutest thing! I am excited to know what is going to happen, because, they're getting close, I mean her mom invited him in, they went to dinner, and AH the cuteness, I am so excited for this story<3.

I like it, and I love the name Brooklyn! Update soon?

So cute! I love this story! :) I'm glad you updated this! I rec'ed and subscribed!

Awh, she was so nervous when she met him. I can't wait to see how the rest will unfold (: more soon, ma'am!

THIS IS SO CUTE!
Update soon! :)

Sorry it took me so long to comment! Anyway, this is cute! I like it a lot. (: Update?

aw:) the relationship between Brooklyn and her sister is cute
Update soon!

this is amazing i can't wait for the next chapter!! <3

God, that's awkward. I'm so sorry. The comment was so long and I didn't see the other comments as I was on my phone.. .-.

The only thing I found wrong with this grammatically were the repeats:
I stare at him, my eyes wide with confusion as I stare at my boyfriend of three and a half years.[\i]

I do it, too, sometimes when I'm not thinking. x)
That's really only the negative thing I have to say.

I'm actually shocked, though, but I feel quite good. I'm your first comment. I took the story's comment virginity ;D Yeah, that sounded so much better in my head, aha.
Anyway, I'm excited for you to write this just as you are to write it. I'm kind of curious to see how all of this unfolds. It really seems like Harry genuinely loves her so he better have a good damn reason for doing this. Lol.

I hope Brooklyn doesn't relapse, though, seeing as how Harry helped her with cutting and now he's not there..temptation would be there. Anyway, great start. I can't wait for more!(:

Aw poor Brooklyn. Please update this soon?

Oh my gosh I love it!!
I can't wait for you to update!

This sounds really good:) I might have to read this if you update it