Not With Haste - Comments

I really like the beginning. Can't wait to see where you'll lead us next... :)

Loved the story so far and I can't wait to read more x

YOU UPDATED.
Yes! Thank you. I was ready to beg, you know. I've been thinking about what might happen and who the characters were, and it was slowly turning into an obsession, but you updated. Yes!

That chapter was great. It all makes sense that she wants to get a divorce before she can go on with life.
I love how you showed Vera to be strong and emotional and weak in the same chapter. That's what real characters are made of.

I don't know if I can say that this chapter was better than what you had before, because it was already great before, but I definitely loved it, and it defnitely made me even more impatient to read what comes next, and yes, I said it and I'll say it again, this story is brilliant. I do hope there'll be another update soon. Otherwise I'll beg for it, and I'll annoy you so much that you'll be forced to update just to make me shut up :)

I love this!! I absolutely do. I cant wait to see what happens next. Going through the character page made me so very excited. Vera is such a kick ass protagonist. I eager to see how Harry and Vera will get together.

Great start!!

please update soon:3 its so good I cant wait to see what happens next

As promised, I've read what you have posted so far and I must say, I'm still liking this story. It does sound logical to not still want to be Mrs. Alvarado when moving on and going to England. So, them getting this divorce would be the most perfect way to move on properly.
Looking forward to the next chapter! xox

Whooooo! I'm so happy she's taking control of her future. Kudos.
Please update soon!
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i love this story! can't wait to see what happens at trial.

Your stories are way too perfect to only be on this site and not being sold as a book...
Always amazing. Loving the revamp so far. Did you also change the characters names? I don't remember if these were their names before or not. Anyway, it's not important, aha, I can't wait to read the next chapter, this one was... woah.

I don't have any words left with you, I think I've said all the good things one can say about someone and their writing along the time I've been reading your stories, you 21st century Jane Austen, you!

- Sara.

because you're you, i know this will be an amazing story! its was a great start. please update when you can =)

because you're you, i know this will be an amazing story! its was a great start. please update when you can =)

I'm extremely impatient to discover which changes you're going to make to this story, and I just looked at the character page, and I'm very curious to get to know all these new characters. They seem like they'll be interesting. I can't wait.
Brilliant writing for this chapter. I hope there'll be a new update soon.

I'm excited for this to grow. I know you have a better idea for this than before.
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The amount of detail you write with kinda blows me away. So perfect. And I feel like I should point out that you use the name paulina in one of the first few paragraphs. Anyway, super stoked to see what you do with this.

loving this already:D

OH!! MY!! GOD!! I've fallen in love with this story and only one chapter has been posted ah! This seems like a wonderful story and it has an amazing plot. Looking forward to the future chapters!! Please update soon? x

Please update soon, can't wait for more.

Can't wait for more :)

It's back and I am stoked for it all to unfold.

I think I've subscribed to this story on three different occasions (this one being the most recent) and every time you've taken it down and revamped haha so I'm very excited to see you're happy with the plot and whatnot! Can't wait for this story!