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  • treat02

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    @ writingismypassion23
    Yep, that's what I was going for tehe
    Thank you so much!!!
    You are very kind.
    I did also want to imply that the story wasn't finished. :D
    August 13th, 2013 at 03:29pm
  • Writer in the Rye

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    Wow. Just wow. DO NOT, by any means, apologize for Chapter Nine being a short chapter. I would not have liked or even written it any differently. Wow. You elucidated in just the right spots, gave no more or no less and that's what made it perfect. Sometimes when there is such an intense emotion at play, using as little words possible makes it all the more powerful. I adore the title you've chosen for it, and as always, perfect summary. The last sentence of Ch. 9 absolutely gave me chills so bravo, bravo :)
    August 13th, 2013 at 03:01pm
  • Jenna's happeh

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    Wow I like this. When I was12, I would have shit my pants,
    Good job!
    July 23rd, 2013 at 07:36pm
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