I normally try not to notice grammar mistakes like that would make me seem like am over boarding criticizing, but I wanna see where this story would go (fingers crossed) lol!
@ Tori London If I told you what I was planning then I'd ruin the story :D Seriously though, thanks for the comment my dear. This story is a prequel so the ending of this one is already kinda spoiled. I shall be taking the sequel down and rewriting it from tonight I think, again to fix a few errors :) The sequel was my first ever story so there are a load of mistakes that I've missed due to just not seeing them when I check over my work (I really need a beta lol)
@ Tiny-Girl I took the chapters down yesterday. I'm rewriting the chapters in order to fix a few inconsistencies and mistakes that I've made. It will be reposted at some point during the next few days chapter by chapter
I would love to to see them in the company, it would be interesting to see how being in the company changes everyone. This chapter was sad especially his mother.