I'm definitely intrigued!!! So intense! I'm curious to see how she got so bad! I look forward go seeing where this goes! She seems so troubled, made me think Marc was so sweet. If you can write that well in an hour, I can't wait to see what you come up with! And hopefully soon!
Oh my goodness, this story is seriously so good. There's so much emotion in it, and the characters aren't going through the typical, boring character problems. I felt so bad when he was dumping her. It was so so so sad, especially how she was crying and begging him not to do it. and I can't believe her brother would turn on her like that! It was really sad too. I feel so bad for the poor girl and I really hope things start to get better for her soon! I can’t wait for you to update so I can see what happens next!