I'll Stop the World and Melt With You - Comments

awww that's is an uhhmazing couple
i wish i could meet someone like that

nice writing and good scene!

I get it know. Once again Shannon I think it was wonderful.

Great one-shot.
I loved it.

oneshot= just a short story, one chapter, that's it.
(:

I still think it was a great story and I too subscribed to it. I just ant to know where chapter two is cause this is a good story. By oneshot do you mean there will only be one chapter?

i got it and i thought it was awesome. *subscribes*

haha. well, for one, it's a oneshot
and the characters arent supposed to be named, so it will be that confusing

Really great story, only thing I suggest is naming the characters. I found it hard to follow the difference in the two. but other then that keep going. Where is chapter 2.

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