My Forever Girl - Comments

i love ur story keep it up updated soon plz want to know more

@ katiexjonas Awwww :') Your comment gives me encouragement!! Yes, it's been a long time... I VERY long time... I recently had to read my story over to remind myself what was going on...lol Working on an update as we speak! Thank you for your kind words!! <3

I just found your story. I couldn't put it down. It's great. I love the twists you keep adding. I see that it's been a long time since you've updated. I would appreciate if you would update. This is quite a cliffhanger to be left off at. I'm at the edge of my seat and loving every minute of it.

@ dedicatedandproud
I believe he did too :) Thanks for reading and commenting!

I have a feeling Mr.Jayden made a horrible mistake by ignoring the fox.... I like the update!

It took me a while to pick up on the fact that this was a twilight fan fic. I guess I'm just slow today. To the point where I’m not 100 percent sure how I feel about this. I will admit I only read up to chapter four, but it’s hard to judge a fan fic in my opinion. So I’ll pick on the only thing I can – the layout. Which is beautiful, my only qualm is the bright pink bar across the top. It’s utterly out of place. Otherwise, everythings decent. Sorry for the lack of help this is!

Sweet baby Jesus! !! That ending tho.... YOU FINALLY UPDATE WOOT WOOT! At first I was so confused but as soon as I read on I understood and I JUST CANT WAIT TILL YOU UPDATE AGAIN!

:( I'm sorry! I'll get on it!

You re taking to long to update

HES GONE MAD! POOR THING! Thanks for the update!

@ dedicatedandproud
Thank you sooooooooooo much for reading! Ch. 12 should be a good one, at least I think it is... Guess I'll have to see what you all think!!!

@ ShannonMarie
I know I know.. :) I was so undecided on which way I wanted the story to go... But I think I've made the right decision.. Giving the story a little more mystery to it ;)

omg! what a cliff hanger! please update soon!

I FINALLY FINISHED . .... I LOVE IT DO UPDATE SOON

@ lacerated lullaby
I'm working on it :D It's going to be a crazy one!!!

love the new chapter!! update soon!!!

Thank you so much!!! Glad you like it! I will definitely update soon.. I still have a few chapters to add on here before this story is updated with what I have so far. I'm currently working on Chapter 12 so I'm hoping I can get that up sometime next week as well!

I just found this story and I hope you update soon because I love it :)

Thanks for letting me know, I didn't even see that 'til now! I fixed it..

All of the lines are jumbled together due to the layout. It is a good layout but it makes the story impossible to read.