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  • Lady Nikki Nightmare

    Lady Nikki Nightmare (215)

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    The only problem I have with it is there are a few grammatical errors, I feel like this will be a great plot line as it continues, so I look forward to reading more.
    August 28th, 2013 at 01:31am
  • Death_to_Roses

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    The title of your story needs to be You're My Savior. :)
    August 27th, 2013 at 05:03am
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