Love your story. I'm glad the lie is finally over and she is with Draco. But it's sad that Hermione is upset with her. I hope Pansy gets her ass kicked for not keeping her word haha
Personally, I don't know... I had an idea of where this might be going but am most likely wayyyyy off... I did think it was pansy who saw them so at least I got that one right... can't wait for next update!!
The writing gets a little choppy sometimes, and I'll notice some grammatical errors but I overlook it all because of your characters! They're personalities and voice are so well-developed that any other imperfections in the story sort of just disappear. Andy is hilarious! And Draco and Harry are so angsty that it's priceless. My favorite part is the insults they throw at each other. I just keep laughing.
I love this. Definitely subscribing and I can't wait for more!
OMG OMG OMG!!! What a crazy turn of events! I can't WAIT to find out what happens next! I'm worried because you've written both boys so well that I don't know who I want her to pick! I'm glad you get to go to Ireland, and I sincerely hope you get the chance to update while you're there but if not, I won't kill you! Just update everything that you wrote as soon as you get back!!! :)