In Between Brothers - Comments

Please i want the rewrite ☺

Too late. I hate you

Now I don't hate you...but I HATE YOU!!! I loved it. The whole thing with.Vince and the brawl, it was good. Keep it up. But Danny got shot?! I swear they stay in the hospital. They friends and fam get hurt so much they might as well just move the fuck in

Um...wow. I swear this craziness is never ending. What is Destiny even doing now? They need to get over this foolishness already

Okay, so one: you called the uncle, Uncle Vernon so check that in this chapter and the one before it. It was really great though. The ending was very unexpected, but i'm glad that it happened. Good job

Oh wow, just found this story and I love it! Love the twins soooo much. Great characters, you do need to look at your grammar and spellings though. But still love it!!

Nshahsksangksjagsoszkacqlbsgs Are you freaking serious?! Are you really?! Omg I am so mad!!! So mad. That's a good thing, but still...

Okay. Did he just blow him in a hospital?! Am I the only that thinks hospitals smell like death and is a horrible atmosphere for sex?! Yes? Damn...

I'm confused. What the hell just happened with Adrian and aydian?! What?! WHAT?! Ahhdjsngaimagagakosvaf

Update!

Caitlin you slut! Evil conniving slubucket from hell, you are. And to think I liked you, but nope! Done! Aydian needs to tell Destiny what happened

That was so sad. I was so right, Gerald's a douche, a big fat used one!! It was dramatic and had a few light moments, a good balance if you ask me. It was really good. Keep goin.

Het story was sad. Gerald's a douche. I love the twins and their relationship with Destiny and her family. They're father is disgusting! Like for real dude, if you like touching younger man, go to a god damn gay bar!

You have piqued my interest woman! That was good. Like really good. Keep going ya fart!