Just Want Out - Comments

this is amazing omg

Ayyyyyyyyy u updated!!!! Why do I have a feeling something is going to happen with Matt I s2g

HEYO u should update

I JUST WANT THEM TO LOVE ALREADY IS THAT SO MUCH I JUST NEED THE LOVE AND WHAT THE HELL ARE THEY GONNA DO TO HER HAIR

PLEASE UPDATE THIS WE WOULD ALL LOVE U FOREVER omg pls

CONTINUE!!!!! MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER SOON PLEASE I'M GOING NUTS WITH THE WAIT!!!!!!!

Interesting update! I'm anxious to see why he's kidnapped her and why the rest of the band is so chill about it, like this is a regular thing.

There are a lot of grammar mistakes, I'd suggest doing a read-over before each chapter or getting a beta for help!

@ SimplySoniax3
NO IT'S PERFECT AND IT BEING OLI JUST MAKES IT PERFECT AND YOURE PERFECT I realllllly wanna see what you have in mind for this :D

@ fagsgarth
oh no i had no clue at all psht.
NO STOP READING THIS MY SITTY WORK DOESNT DESERVE TO BE LOOKED AT BY YOUR TALENTED SELF NOW I HAVE TO MAKE SURE THIS IS PERFECT.

wow im so excited for this :))) (i reallly really like kidnap fics incase you havent noticed)

I haven't read an Oli fic in a long time. I think this is pretty interesting, and just entertaining. I'm really enjoying it. I hope you update soon!