Daughter of Thor - Comments

  • alicerose123

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    @ luvelylife
    Hey i dont update alot on here so if you want to read i update alot more on watt pad Very Happy
    May 27th, 2014 at 06:13pm
  • luvelylife

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    I love this!!! Please keep writing can't wait for the next chapter
    May 13th, 2014 at 03:31am
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    @ MatiMarie
    thanks :D and i was just a being lazy will the spelling ha ha next time i post if it hasn't improved tell me, then ill see about letting you proof read.
    October 30th, 2013 at 06:37pm
  • MatiMarie

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    Hey!! I really love the idea of your story and it's portrayal!! I'm subscribing :) however, there are a few little spelling or grammar errors, and I love the story so I'd be more than willing to do minor editing for you if you'd like? (Proofreading/editing the little things.) You can check out the story I have posted, Navy Blue Eyes, as proof that my spelling and such is solid? Again, really enjoying the story otherwise and can't wait to see more :)
    October 28th, 2013 at 09:43pm