It's flawless & I'm literally yearning for more.
February 6th, 2014 at 10:36pm
Why Do I Love You? Contest
June Parker. Denver. It’s such a catastrophe.
I love how you put this in Denver’s point of view. It’s rare for me to read stories that are in a guy’s point of view. Usually, they always involve the point of view of a girl.
This was such a catastrophic story, the story that sets your mood into pessimism and makes you realize that the love life you have may be going far better than those out there. Although I’ve never had a relationship with someone, I’ve always wanted someone to love me. I guess everyone craves love –especially Denver. Again, I send my condolences to him.
I never understood what you short summary was about. I did think that it involved a girl named June Parker who was totally screwed up. It turned out you gave this in a guy’s point of view. One who has fallen in love with the ‘totally screwed up’ girl and didn’t imagine how it could have ended this way.
There were no grammatical or spelling errors that caught my attention. It was pure, raw talent you have that you brought to the table. I’m glad to have read this story because it surely brought something else entirely different which added to the reasons why I love reading stories in a guy’s point of view.