Okay, so I really loved this drabble! There are two things that I want to mention, however. The first is the capitalisation of "It" after the ellipsis, which isn't needed. The second is towards the end, "God is love, but she believes otherwise" is followed by "she believes that he is love" which means she doesn't believe otherwise. Right?
Overall, this story is beautiful and so happy, which makes a nice change from the dark, gritty drabble that I see so often.
Overall, this story is beautiful and so happy, which makes a nice change from the dark, gritty drabble that I see so often.