Cross My Heart - Comments

I'm glad Johnny is trying but he better not pull a Houdini or I'm helpin the guys set up a missin person case tht won't be solved in fifty million years so get ur shit together Johnny, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

So glad that Johnny is trying!!! He better not leave or I will help Brian and Matt bury him on a desert island!!!!! Looking forward to more :)

I think Johnny honestly is frightened of the idea of becoming a father. At least he didn't refuse to spend time with Brent.

At least he's trying, it's not as if he flat out refused to even acknowledge Brent's existence. I think Johnny is probably scared too, he's only ever had to look after himself before, now he has another human being to think about and take care of. He's probably shitting himself, poor guy. I think he'll step up to the plate though, I don't think he'll leave Ronnie to raise Brent alone, and if he does, Matt and Brian will bury him on some remote island somewhere, never to be seen again! Haha

I hope they can get past this and be happy together :) Also, I love the banter between Ronnie and Brian, it's hilarious! Baby boo Brian awwwww! Hahaha

More soon please! :D

hummm.. thank you for that lovely visual in the beginning.. I thought my room was chilly- until I read that and got the image of a shirtless Brian painting his nephews room.. *sighs*

aawe! she's scared that johnny will leave.. well I guess things will get hard for him *get ya head outta the gutter lol* and that he'll probably walk out for a few hours or so but I really hope that he wont just leave them all together.. mostly because then he'll be 6ft under by the hands of bri and matt

and damn brent's just so cute!!

Aww! Maybe we should see Johnny's POV and see how he really feels.

Aww Johnny!!!! I understand but he didn't have to be so abrupt about it!!! I don't know...I hope this isn't bad for them!!

I can see where Johnny's coming from, Brent already has a father, even though his real father is a douche bag and just dumped the poor little guy on Ronnie, he's still his dad. Maybe, in time, Brent will come to know Johnny as a father figure but right now I think Ronnie should introduce Johnny as Mommy's special friend or even boyfriend. I think Johnny should have explained himself a little more to Ronnie though but I guess he's a guy, they always go about things ass backwards haha

More soon please :D

-.- seriously Johnny, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Johnny really... Not the smartest move.

seriously johnny.. that did not come out good at all.. and I bet that it was brent that said hi, when he just ignored it and kept walking to the bathroom.. he is kind of digging a hole for himself right now..
and poor little brent had a nightmare <3

Finally found some time to catch up with your story guys! :D

First of all, I love the banner, that baby boy is such a cutie! I like the picture of the female character too, she's really pretty :)

I love the plot for this, already I'm finding myself wanting to read more and more and I'm only on the first chapter. It's really unique, especially with Johnny as the main character and Ronnie as a drunk instead of the man, I like it :D

Chapter One
I really feel for her, that must be devastating having your baby taken away from you, but I find myself agreeing with Brian, there must have been a reason for Alex to file for custody in the first place. Even though it's hard on Ronnie, I think Brian is right. I'm glad she wants to get clean, if not for her sake for her baby's sake. I like the flashback at the start of the chapter, letting us know what happened, how it happened. I'm glad that she gets to see her son, not as much as she would like obviously, but she still sees him. I think its great that she's the tour manager, she seems like such a strong character already, whipping them into shape. I like her :D

Chapter Two
“That’s my little sister, Mr. Hot shot.” I love Brian already! The big, protective brother looking out for his baby sister, bless him!
“Hey, Gnomeo over there—don’t forget who owns those balls.” oh my god, I'm crying!!!
Dammit, Jimmy!! He was about to propose you ass! XD Poor Johnny. Johnny and Ronnie, haha that rhymes! I'll just.. go away into my little corner right over there

Chapter Three
“You shouldn’t have gotten so cuddly then, Ron. Damn, I swear whenever you let me nap on your belly, I slept like a baby,” I'm dying of cuteness here guys! I love cute and cuddly Brian almost as much as sexy as hell Brian xD
I love the relationship Brian and Ronnie have, its so sweet!
Aww no, poor little guy! What does he mean field trip?! I'm panicking! Johnny to the rescue, go on Johnny my boy!

Chapter Four
I like Ronnie and Johnny's (still makes me laugh XD) relationship, its so cute and easy between them. Who knew Johnny could be so much of a hunk? Haha. Oh my god, so he just dumped the baby on the bus?! And he says Ronnie is unfit! I'm glad though, at least now mother and son can be reunited! :D

Chapter Five
That's exactly how my boyfriend gets whenever he plays that damn game, maybe its a man thing.
Aww I'm tearing up here! Brian is just so awesome at being the big brother who makes everything better, making everyone feel better!
I can't wait to see how she's gonna introduce Johnny and Brent to be almost father and son! Eeep!

More soon please! :D

yay she gets brent!!!!!

Hey guys! Just started reading this now and I'm loving it so far. It sucks that Johnny hasn't gotten to propose to her yet, I hope he will soon. I can't believe that Alex just up and left his son and decided to leave the country that's just ridiculous. After fighting so hard for him he just up and leaves him is just cruel but I'm glad that Brent is back with his mother. Please update soon. I need more!

She shouldn't even be thinking about dragging Alex back to the States!
Please update soon!

Well hopefully that is Alex gone for good now :) looking forward to more!!

OMG... I loved it!!!

I mean seriously, the panic attack, mine probably would've been worse, only I would want to call the bastard back to the states, so that I could beat the living hell out of him! I mean seriously, he could've fucking told her on the phone!

Mkays, that's enough for now... I want this updated ASAP!

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Love it, Ronnie relax the guys can handle it and I agree it's time to introduce Johnny to Brent as ur boyfriend.....I'm curious on when Johnny is goin to propose to Ronnie, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

WHAT?! Alex could have called Ron and told her.
PLLEEAASSSSESS update soon!

Oh my gosh!! I think Johnny's proposal plans might be put on hold now. Looking forward to more :)