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  • sylvia wrath

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    @ Juno
    thank you!
    August 12th, 2013 at 08:55pm
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    this was awesomeeeeee'
    more please
    August 12th, 2013 at 08:54pm
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    @ letthewallsbreakdown
    The Liam thing is going to be explained a bit later, but really, yeah, they're just friends. Team Harry is a go!
    August 12th, 2013 at 08:50pm
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    Alright so Liam was so cute. I'm still team Harry though. Sorry can't help it. I'm glad he called her though and it's so cute ugh. But I'm curious to see if the Liam thing is just a friendship or what because there could be some jealousy there between Liam and Harry, yeah? I'm kind of rambling. Also this chapter made me really hungry because they were talking about food. This may be all that I have to say right now. Haha. Thanks for the awesome update <333
    August 12th, 2013 at 08:48pm
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    @ formerlyknownas
    chafing is one of my top priorities too that hurts!!!! and when you swim you like, just piss yourself to keep warm and it's just too much work i can barely cycle properly
    August 12th, 2013 at 08:06pm
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    @ sylvia wrath
    horny Ezra might be my favorite too.
    also let's talk about how when my cousin's friend told me she'd already done an Iron Man and she said that it's swimming, biking, running, my first question was, "wait you swim and then run? what about chafing???" and they were all like "THAT'S ALL SHE'S WORRIED ABOUT. CHAFING." which I think says a lot about my priorities.
    August 12th, 2013 at 08:04pm
  • sandrashameless

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    @ sylvia wrath
    those are way too many possibilities for my liking!

    i know, jesus. so is zayn and louis. -_-
    August 12th, 2013 at 07:44pm
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    @ sandrashameless
    hahahaha. I mean, Liam might want for something to happen. OR he might want to scope out the chick his best mate is interested in. OR he just wants a friend. We shall see.

    Yes the world needs more Liam stories I feel that he is greatly underappreciated.
    August 12th, 2013 at 07:42pm
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    @ sylvia wrath
    well Hezra is my otp here, but i'm just saying, i wouldn't hold it against you if anything else happened...
    ps i'm working on maybe another Liam story.
    August 12th, 2013 at 07:36pm
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    @ sandrashameless
    Liam shirtless is kind of adorable but I will say, I call the story Hezra for a reason. But Liam is going to be very important!!!
    August 12th, 2013 at 07:32pm
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    omggggggggggg idk who i ship more honestly. these days i'd ship Liam with anyone as song as he took his shirt off though
    August 12th, 2013 at 07:30pm
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    @ saratastic
    me too omg i was DYING
    Liam is a sweetie his sweetness is still to be discovered as well
    oh, yes, the date that Ezra will firmly see as lunch!
    August 12th, 2013 at 07:21pm
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    @ formerlyknownas
    yes you do have some intel about the furniture thing mhm
    it's coming up sooner than you think

    Iron Man triathlons just seem like an all around bad idea okay? my french teacher in high school did them and she was always so excited. but it seems bery ~Liam.

    horny Ezra is my favorite because sometimes she just says what everyone thinks oh man
    August 12th, 2013 at 07:20pm
  • saratastic

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    Harry Styles twerking was definitely in the top 10 best moments of my entire life. Liam is such a sweetie and seemed to be really fun to hang out with for Ezra! Such a cutie. And I'm so happy Harry called her and properly asked her out! What a stud. Can't wait for the date :)
    August 12th, 2013 at 07:20pm
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    Half of London already knows you’re obsessed with Niall. You won’t shut up about him.”
    hahahahaha

    Sure enough, when I looked at Harry’s profile, the words “follows you” were right there next to his name. “Huh.” I mused. “Would you look at that?”
    I hear wedding bells.

    I want to do one of those Iron Men triathlons.
    fun fact: my cousin just did the rock n roll marathon in san diego and directly afterward when we were all exhausted in bed about to nap (yes, me included okay I WALKED OVER SEVEN MILES THAT DAY IN CANVAS SNEAKERS MY LEGS WERE KILLING ME), my cousin and her friends started joking about doing this Iron Man triathlon IN KANSAS IN THE SUMMER. okay if you've been to Kansas in the summer, you can understand why this is a very, very bad idea. it's as humid as Florida but without the bonus of being near a beach.

    “You don’t have furniture for your apartment?”
    you know you treated me to something that is cluing me in to what's going to happen with this furniture stuff and let me just say that I am excited.

    “Holy shit.” The girl standing right next to me breathed, her eyes wide as she stared at Liam. “He really is perfect in real life.”
    ahahahaha oh god

    Images of a half-naked Harry Styles on the other line of the telephone were enough to get my heart racing. I was hormonal and horny and his gravelly little chuckles and sighs really weren’t helping the situation.
    someone fan me

    god I just want them to love each other ALREADY
    hezra forever
    August 12th, 2013 at 07:17pm
  • LookingForSophie

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    That makes perfect sense! :) and thank you for writing it! :)
    August 12th, 2013 at 11:23am
  • sylvia wrath

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    @ LookingForSophie
    I'm talking about uni, but I was probably a bit liberal in my making of things up. Let's just say she's taking a media and film course in university in England, but as she is still technically a part of her university back in Connecticut and is a transfer, she has to take a few general ed courses? Might not make sense, but it's already written. Thank you for the info, though! And I'm glad that you've enjoyed!
    August 12th, 2013 at 06:17am
  • LookingForSophie

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    Oh man I fucking love this :) I got a little confused about the liberal arts school and her doing Chemistry, but are you talking about uni or high school? Because American unis are REALLY different from ours. You take loads of classes right? We take like one maybe two? You apply to a uni for the course you want to do. So for her it would be whatever arts course she wants to do, and she's just do that course so say it was film making she would literally just take a class on film making for 3 or 4 years, and she might have a secondary thing so like a joint degree so she'd so film making and journalism or something. I was just curious :P But the innuendo bingo had me in fits :) You're an amazing writer, please keep it up! :D
    August 12th, 2013 at 05:49am
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    @ cynicalqueen
    Hahaha, Ezra is a funny little duckling. Innuendo Bingo is pretty funny, and if you think reading it is good, try watching!

    @ timeisup
    Thank you! :)
    August 10th, 2013 at 06:50am
  • timeisup

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    This was amazing!
    August 10th, 2013 at 02:02am