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  • missmarianjane

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    WOAH.
    this chapter was big and painful to read, but I think it was needed for Ez and Haz bc they are pretending to live in a bubble and that's nice but it's not real is it. I think maybe this'll help they're characters grow and love eachother more, or crash and burn (fingers crossed the latter won't happen!). Can't wait for the next chapter!!! You're such a great writer, love reading :))))
    July 3rd, 2014 at 08:12pm
  • vices

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    NO
    SHE SAID MILKSHAKE
    OH GOD, NO!
    i think i'm ready for the tears to flow because wow
    this is just so overwhelming for Ezra and idc if she's fiction i feel so awful for her because she's at this point in her career where yes, she's shooting up to stardom and such but then there's that shit about questioning everything about her work life and her own credibility because of her personal life and i just really feel for her :((((((
    totally agree with HopefulRissa that "baby please" was a total heartbreaker
    July 3rd, 2014 at 03:25am
  • Bravados

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    That was intense and I wasn't ready.
    June 25th, 2014 at 07:55pm
  • HopefulRissa

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    Well, damn. "Baby please" was kind of a killer last line.
    June 25th, 2014 at 05:05pm
  • Jtzgirl

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    My heart is now broken! These fans are seriously irritating!
    June 25th, 2014 at 12:19pm
  • Emilly_13

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    Oh my god. I'm not even sure how to deal with all of this! HARRY IS SO DAFT!!!!! You can't leave me hanging like this! I am off to read tumblr now!
    June 24th, 2014 at 06:38pm
  • juliusness1

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    you're breaking my heart in the most beautiful way possible.
    June 24th, 2014 at 12:23pm
  • yvetterrz

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    Ugh the feels!!! It was so well written that I wanted to cry with Ezra! I literally want you to post the entire story just so that I no longer have to wait for you to update!!! Soooo gooooood!
    June 24th, 2014 at 11:11am
  • cantcontainit

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    I AM SO STRESSED. ezra bbygirl. god she doesn't even have anything right now. nowhere to go, nothing to find solace in, nothing that's not absolutely fucking painful right now. jasdkfsshjfghjkhkjfgfffffffffffff i wish she could actually hug her mom :((((
    June 24th, 2014 at 07:59am
  • looking for alaska.

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    I am so so so so so so sad. I can't believe that chapter, it just got worse and worse. I feel like you ripped my heart out my chest and stomped on it.
    June 24th, 2014 at 06:01am
  • ALBY

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    Wow, so many emotions in this chapter... You have written this so well that I can feel Ezra's pain. Just...wow.
    June 24th, 2014 at 04:52am
  • onewritestand

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    I HAVE MASTERED THE ART OF ONLY RELEASING TEARS FROM ONE EYE SO THAT MY FAMILY WOULDN'T ASK WHAT WAS GOING ON.
    June 24th, 2014 at 04:08am
  • onewritestand

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    so much angst.
    June 24th, 2014 at 03:55am
  • onewritestand

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    so much angst.
    June 24th, 2014 at 03:55am
  • onewritestand

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    so much angst.
    June 24th, 2014 at 03:55am
  • xChAoSx

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    my heart hurts
    June 24th, 2014 at 03:04am
  • epicninjachica

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    That was absolutely fucking heart breaking holy shit I feel like I just went through that like God damn my heart literally hurts
    June 24th, 2014 at 02:19am
  • settheworldonfire

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    Omfg, litterally tears in my eyes
    June 24th, 2014 at 01:01am
  • little.light

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    I think my heart just broke a little bit...
    June 24th, 2014 at 12:48am
  • Sinfullyobvious

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    You honest to god had me sobbing. I just can't
    June 24th, 2014 at 12:27am
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