Don't Give up on Me - Comments

  • ThisMeansWar_

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    @ gay-guts-galore
    *shrugs* I can't reveal anything about the next chapter, other than the fact that it's being written, lol.
    You got kicked out of school? That sucks! But, thank you (:
    August 20th, 2013 at 05:17pm
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    that storm and those ominous clouds had me worried for a moment but as I'm writing this I feel I should still be worried about them.
    I'd say that I'd feel you on how school is starting but my school just kicked me out :c good luck with your new year!
    August 20th, 2013 at 04:37am
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    @ frankieraepain
    Aw yay!! And yeah, I'm a junior so I've got two more years before I go to college -.- Thanks so much for understanding!(:
    August 19th, 2013 at 08:21pm
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    @ Kayla_Marie
    Sounds good. And I loved the chapter as usual. I'm so happy that they are together that I jumped up and fell off of my bed. Anyway sorry you have to go to school, I know how much school sucks and sometimes rocks, I graduated last year. Have fun at school and when you can update!
    August 19th, 2013 at 07:54pm
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    @ frankieraepain
    Aw, thanks so much! I pulled through it, however, but I will be sure to get your help the next time I do!
    August 19th, 2013 at 04:58pm
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    @ Kayla_Marie
    If you need any help, I'll be glad to help. Just private message me.
    August 18th, 2013 at 03:33am
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    @ frankieraepain
    Glad I could! And its okay, I think the general topics of endings got to my sleep deprived self.
    Also, I'm working on the chapter still, I've just got severe writers block x_x
    August 17th, 2013 at 10:41pm
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    @ Kayla_Marie
    You made my day! How am I reading your mind? I'm just speaking some gospels. ...Sorry, sometimes I get a little weird... :D
    August 17th, 2013 at 07:19am
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    @ frankieraepain
    I feel like you're reading my mind, omg. GET OUT OF MY HEAD. lolol. that's it, the Jellyfish is being made a part of the story somehow, okay? Very Happy
    August 16th, 2013 at 10:20pm
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    @ Kayla_Marie
    I don't think you could ruin my life but I don't think some plot twist could hurt anything all I'm really REALLY hoping for is maybe a slight happy ending or a not so sad but not really happy ending. I think that would be cool. And my friend said "Fuck yea, jellyfish." Haha.
    August 16th, 2013 at 08:49pm
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    @ frankieraepain
    Well, Serena isn't going to go away anytime soon, that's all I can reveal. But maybe I'll make her get a pet jellyfish because that is literally brilliant, lolol.
    The sequel is classified information. It's still in its beginning stages, and I'm trying not to focus on it so much so I can make this story perfect (:
    I've felt that way, too, and trust me, I'm not aiming to ruin your life, I just wanna write a story that isn't boring; and if making a few severe plot twists makes it not boring, then so be it.
    August 16th, 2013 at 06:35pm
  • frankieraepain

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    @ Kayla_Marie
    My friend doesn't like Serena so she just looked at me and said, "Plot twist: Serena is a jellyfish." I personally thought it was brillant. I also don't think this story could ever get boring. It's going at a perfect pace and is amazing to say the least. I just really hope you don't make them like hate each other for years and then when you write the sequel, which I am now excited for, for the first few chapters that they come together in it, it be really awkward between them.
    I feel like we have become some what of friends during our little comment adventure throughtout you writing this story and I don't want to be upset when shit hits the fan but alas it is your story so I am trusting you with my emotions and I know you will write awesome updates as usual.
    Okay, so this is really long so until the next update, mi amigo!
    August 16th, 2013 at 08:24am
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    @ melaniekgut
    I know how you feel. Even though my dad has gotten a raise, travelling by car for 12 hours is super exspensive with three kids to worry about as well, so I don't get to see my grandmother or her house very often anymore. But, I'm glad I got you to reminisce about good memories at your Grandmother's house.
    August 15th, 2013 at 06:13pm
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    @ frankieraepain
    What do you mean by jellyfish???? I am SO confused! Thank you for getting your friend to read it! Your friend, thanks for reading, I really appreciate it!
    Also, don't be too scared by my author's note! I just don't want this story to be boring, so I'm keeping yall on your toes. (: And I'm definitely planning a sequel now, too, so if anything, you won't hate me for too long!
    Thanks again for reading, doll c:
    August 15th, 2013 at 06:11pm
  • melaniekgut

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    @ Kayla_Marie
    It's definitely a good thing! I love it there. I don't get to go there as much as I'd like.
    August 15th, 2013 at 03:04am
  • frankieraepain

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    I also need to add my own little thing that I forgot to put in my comment.
    Plot twist, Serena is a jellyfish.
    ....That is what my best friend is hoping...
    August 15th, 2013 at 02:19am
  • frankieraepain

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    Your author's note scares and flatters me. I got my best friend to read this and she loves it! I'm sad no triple updates. :( This story is a beautiful piece of words.
    August 15th, 2013 at 02:16am
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    @ inkskinned
    I hope not! I just like a good plot twist... or seven. Haha. If it makes you feel better, you wouldn't be in pain for too long because I'm already planning a sequel after this is finished.
    August 14th, 2013 at 08:17pm
  • nihilist.cryptid

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    You're authors note... is this going to hurt me?
    Why this?
    August 14th, 2013 at 07:04pm
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    @ melaniekgut
    Aw, I'm hoping that a good thing
    August 14th, 2013 at 08:36am