Omf. This is amazing for your first smut! Good job!
November 17th, 2013 at 04:38pm
This was fantastic, not gonna lie. For your first time smut, I'm fucking amazed! My first smut was nowhere near this well written; it still isn't this well written! The situation, the reactions, the details were so spot on, I'm nearly flustered over here myself.
If your smut was this great, I'm excited to read a regular piece of your writing. Seriously, great job.