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  • dawn of light

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    can they get any cuter??/
    no bc i love them and i wish to be in charlie's shoes
    LET ME LOVE YOU HARRY
    uuuuhhhhhh I LOVE YOU TOO HARRY
    okay i feel very envious rn
    "loves you more than a fat kid loves cake" OMG AHHH
    HHAHAHAHA THE CLOTHES HANGER
    hahahahahah okay harry i love you too
    why is this so cute ??? :))))
    August 20th, 2013 at 04:05am
  • broken bells

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    I love everything about this. I was a bit slow and didn't realize that each chapter was the meaning behind his tattoos until I reached Hi, and I liked the story before, but once I realized what you were doing it just made the story fantastic. It's unique and the chapters are simple and short, but each one is super important and I love that.

    I think this is my favorite Harry story, to be honest. I get super excited whenever I see an update, so keep it up! Cute
    August 19th, 2013 at 06:16am
  • losing control.

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    This is such a unique idea for a story. To be honest, I didn't even know Harry had tattoos, nevermind this many, but I really like the idea of making up stories for each of them.

    I like how all the stories connect together, but are exactly an ongoing story, if that makes sense. It's just like little pieces of their lives and I really like how you're writing it.

    Your characters are adorable, and I think they fit in really well with the short chapter thing you’ve got going on here. You let us peak into their lives and their relationship enough to see what we need to see, and then you end everything perfectly.

    Well done!
    August 14th, 2013 at 08:54pm
  • dawn of light

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    I love how their relationship is so sweet and light! Their conversations are very nice and deep. I thought it was very cute how Charlie asked Harry not to change, thus making a good reason why Harry got the tattoo. And I love how the chapters are short but meaningful. It's a fresh way of how you aren't rushing into the concept of the story. I can't wait for more chapters about the rest of his inks! You're a talented writer and you have a good plot in your palms. :)
    August 13th, 2013 at 03:22am
  • AnnaCherie

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    I'm into this Very Happy
    August 9th, 2013 at 05:02am
  • dawn of light

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    THAT IS SO CUTE
    very nice way to introduce the Hi tattoo!
    they way Harry treats Charlie makes me so jealous!
    awkwarddddd moments buying coffee hahahaha
    August 8th, 2013 at 03:21am
  • laredo.

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    You know something? I'm not a fan of One Direction in the slightest. I probably wouldn't have read fanfiction about them, but I do really like this one!

    I have always liked the idea of a chaptered story that has little stories as the chapters. I think there is a certain appeal in them, especially in yours.

    I like that you're coming up with cute little stories to explain why or how Harry got his many tattoos. It's creative and there definitely can be a lot of crazy reasons why he would have gotten some of his tattoos.

    I'm going to subscribe to this, despite the fact that I don't like One Direction. Your writing is really cute, and I look forward to another update. :)
    August 4th, 2013 at 12:32am
  • crazygirl19

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    This is beyond adoraaaaable! Can't wait for more:)
    July 30th, 2013 at 11:13pm
  • swell

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    Aw, I love the idea of this so far. It is interesting to speculate the ideas of Harry's tattoos - and even if we do know some of them, I like that you're making up your own ideas to the background and meaning of his tatts. I like that Harry's first tatt was because of his relationship with Charlie, even though it was a drunken, fun thing to do. The chapters are short but well written, and I'm intrigued to know the other meanings behind his tattoo, especially the butterfly! Now that is what I'm curious to see explained, haha.
    July 28th, 2013 at 11:49am
  • dawn of light

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    I'M JEALOUS OF CHARLIE, that's for sure
    this was beyond cute! :))
    very fast transitions but it was enough for me to know!
    i can't wait to know more about the rest of his tats
    July 28th, 2013 at 03:35am
  • dawn of light

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    ooooOoo I'm excited :)
    July 27th, 2013 at 03:35am