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  • Apology

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    Oh My God!! I'm so happy that you updated you don't understand, I'm crying like no joke!! Oh, Its been so long sinse I've been on Mibba so I'm sorry that I didn't comment when you first posted. I'm back now though lol
    Okay so first of all this chapter was great, I love the twisted progress that has been made. How the lead should hate j hope and she does but she's also very dependent on him. Im also existed for this big twist you just put in the story with j hope gaining so much power and with that has gained danger (lol bts- danger). Wow I can't wait to see where you take this, I'll definitely be waiting to see where you take this :)
    Wahh XD you don't understand how happy I am to see this, and I don't read j Hope fanfic but you don't wanna let me live haha
    February 23rd, 2015 at 02:51am
  • iron underneath;

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    @ Apology
    I have updated! :D
    February 19th, 2015 at 10:39am
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    @ Apology
    I am working on the next chapter as we speak :D
    March 22nd, 2014 at 06:34am
  • Apology

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    Aww please update this story, I'm very captivated by it. All day I've kept coming back to this story to see if you've updated it because this story is so unique to me (I've become really impatient in a short amount of time, its really weird) ~_~
    March 22nd, 2014 at 05:37am
  • Apology

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    Woah! Jung Hoseok! Lol I love how he is a gangster but he's a person also, it's like this is work J Hope and this is home J Hope and you do feel sorry for him because he's so lonely. It also surprised me that there is no bangtan here, it's cool to see J Hope in a situation like this by himself. So please let out another chapter :)
    March 21st, 2014 at 08:34pm
  • She Said Poptarts

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    I never thought that I would read a k-pop story, XD I've only read the first chapter, like I said I would in my candy bowl, and it was good! I like these mob stories... is that what this is? Anyways, where the lead characters are the most feated/dangerous people in a certain country. It's exciting!

    Normally though, the whole possessive thing wouldn't sit well with others... but I prefer werewolves over vampires, so I'm definitely use to fictional possessive men. Yup, that definitely sounds normal. So... I liked the chapter! I can see that you have a good thing going on here! The only mistakes I see are small, and it's mostly for punctuation. GOOD JOB! I'll recommend, just because. :)
    October 5th, 2013 at 11:42pm
  • honeyjoons

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    So I totally am just now catching up on my subs, but omg this is really neat so far! The plot isn't like one I've read in any other K-Pop story which is great. I feel so bad for J-Hope though like I just wanna hug him, that precious child.
    I really can't wait to see how this progresses!
    August 13th, 2013 at 02:39am
  • Snow.White.Queen.

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    Wow, this was a surprise for me! I haven't read anything about this kind of Genre, is he from a K-pop band or what? Sorry, I am quite clueless. I really liked this though, and I really did not expect to! You have a really nice writing style, the flow is most definitely there and your grammar is good. I agree with Kinki Jinki, this is actually rather like something from an action movie! Which in my opinion, is freaking awesome. You use description very well, it makes me fell like I'm actually in the story too. I loved this, I can't wait for more. Great job, love.
    August 7th, 2013 at 05:51pm
  • Sansa Stark

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    Damn, that first chaptered was like an action movie!
    This is pretty cool, I'm subbed ^^
    July 31st, 2013 at 05:22pm