Searching for My Soul Mate. - Comments

Arrived at this story through the comment swap thing.
OKAY, so first comments. The story title doesn't really draw me in, but it immediately tells you what the story itself is about. The story summary doesn't need to have every word capitalized, professionally you should think about correcting this since it takes away from the mature feel you're looking for. Numbers thought be spelled out, too. 'The Back Of There Left Hands' should be their, not there.

I think you would definitely benefit from going back and getting a Beta or proofreading your story again to improve it. If you're interested in improving as a writer you should definitely find time to do this, as grammatical and spelling errors are a big turn off to a lot of people and you won't get more readers.

Try to also make sure that any bbcode you use is closed properly. Not using end tags or forgetting the backslash is probably what's causing large portions of your story to be bolded when it shouldn't be.

You know what?? That did not turn out the way I expected it at all! Bravo, hun! Keep writing things that are different!

Here from comment swap
Firstly, the title doesn't really draw me in all that much, but that's only something minor. The summary however, is very good! Although you didn't need to capitalize the first letter in each word. When i read the summary, I immediately got really excited about this! I've never seen a plot like yours before, and I think I read that this is your first story? Correct me if I'm wrong, but if not then gosh well done with thinking this up!

There are somethings that got on my nerves throughout, like the way you made a lot of things bold. Like if you saw almost a full chapter written like this, it wouldn't look too good would it? I'd get kind of tedious. Maybe that's just me? Also I really hope you find the time to make a layout, or even get a premade one. This looks very boring without one, and it would greatly improve the aesthetic value of the story :)

All in all, despite my criticism, which I hope didn't come off as harsh, I really enjoyed this. I'll recommend it for you :)

@ Meow The Kitten
I know, that's why I said its a good story. You should get an editor or a beta. This would help you and more readers will stick with reading your story. I didn't say it in a bad way.

@ XXXataktoulaXXX
If you read the bottom part of the chapters, you'd know that I do not edit these because I do not have the time, and some times I write on my phone so that's probably why its kinda sucky. If It sucks that much don't read it. Thanks.

You need to edit this story hun.
It's such a nice story that it's a shame its posted like this.

What? nonono!!!!!
Please don`t leave it here!
:)

@Hammerwood My God You Are My Complete And Total Favorite.

shit nuggets this is amazing and sweet and full of drama!!! i love it!!!

*LE GASP*!!!! didnt see that coming!!!

off to a great start

I LOVE THIS!!!!! THIS IS SO AMAZING!!!! you are such a great writer, keep it up. please update this soon :D

SHIT SHIT SHIT! OH MY GLOB I LOVE IT! its so cwute! i LOVE the idea with the finding your perfect match. this is so freaking adorable! please, for the love of unicorns, keep writing this. love it.