Sweet Nothing - Comments

Didn't mean to post twice, sorry.

I just caught up on the lastest chapter and loved it! I like how you are writing Peter Pan, curious, confused and fainty. (is that a word?) And I like the backstory on Tinkerbell, I would like to know more about her on the show. And I know I said this in my first comment, but I adore the layout! How do you make them so nice?

@ silk tea.
I'll have to go back and fix that. I couldn't remember if they could when I wrote this. I think I was watching OUAT a few weeks ago and something made me think of it. So yeah, I'll definitely try and fix that and then maybe try and update!

Ahh I'm really curious to see how Peter becomes the sadistic little shit he is. Also the one thing is I though in OUAT fairies could turn to full size they just technically weren't allowed to. It's like against the rules or some shit.

I hope you continue writing this story. I love the idea, and the first two chapters drew me in rather quickly. I'd love to read more!

Aww, the first chapter made me feel really bad for Peter. I'm so used to the cocky, playful Peter from the movies when I was a child, and I really liked this refreshing twist. You gave him a motivation for wanting to be young forever and I really liked that! And I really like how shocked he was by everything that had happened and he couldn't believe he had flown!

I thought it was sweet that Tinkerbell helped him, even though it could mean a lot of harm for her if she were to get caught as being a fairy.

I think this is really good so far and I can see a lot of exciting things happening in the future!

Sweet Nothing? Sweet BEJEEBUS THIS LAYOUT.
And seriously, Claire Holt is beautiful.
I loved how you made this story your own.
It's really interesting to see how you created this world and how Peter encountered Neverland.

I really enjoy what you've done with this piece. I like how you took Peter Pan and put your own spin on it, and made it relateable to everyone reading it.

I like how you made Peter seventeen, as opposed to younger like many people seem to, and how you made Tinkerbell able to change into a human form. That's a really cool thing to add to the story.

I'm really interested to see where you do with this, your writing style seems to fit perfectly with this type of stories so I'm sure it will get even more interesting as you get further in.

The layout was gorgeous as well, I love the different galaxy type patterns you mixed together.

Well done!

Firstly, the layout. It's so pretty, but it's so simple at the same time. Really effective though, I love it!

I also love the general concept of this. I know that there have been a lot of different ideas as to how Peter came to be in Neverland (and they never really explained that in the Disney film), so I really like that you've taken this angle on it. I'm a massive fan of the Disney film and I used to read Peter Pan and Wendy all of the time when I was younger, so I'm really interested to see how you'll take the tale and make it your own, because there really are so many unanswered questions about Peter Pan in general, and so many ways his story could be interpreted.

In most of the stories or fanfictions I've read about Peter Pan, he's been about 12, so I think it's going to be really interesting and unique to read about him being seventeen. I think that people would be able to relate more to him at that stage, especially when you've mentioned at the beginning that the reason he doesn't want to grow up is the idea of having his own family and responsibilities that come with that. Personally, I can definitely relate to that because it's something that I worry about infrequently. So right off the bat, Peter is a really realistic character and he already seems to be three-dimensional to me even by reading that really small part there. Tinkerbell is the same - even though she's termed as a supernatural being, she seems to be really down-to-earth and again, she has that sense of being like everyone else, really relateable. I think realistic characters are definitely a great thing (Peter fainting when he reached Neverland due to the shock - loved it!).

Add all of what I've previously said into the fact that you have a really lovely writing style, and you've got a great story here. Description is spot-on, I can really feel what the characters are feeling throughout (especially Peter in the first chapter, my heart was breaking for him).

I've rambled on for quite a bit, so I'll wind it in now. I'll definitely be subscribing to this, it looks like it's going to be amazing!

Woah, that was a good chapter. I never thought of Tinker being the one to bring Peter to Neverland so I like the idea of her doing that. Great chapter and thanks for mentioning me at the end of the last chapter!

I already love this story. The layout is amazing and super cute and the title is creative and unique.
I really like where this story is headed so please update soon!