Great story, really well written! It's a shame that things like this happen all the time. We always promise the ones we love it will never happen again, but we can't protect them from everything.
July 29th, 2013 at 05:45pm
I think the biggest thing I liked about this was the ambiguity. The story implied that the protagonist had been abused by someone in some way in their past while never going into full detail about it all, which allows the reader to come up with their own explanations. I don't know, it just intrigued me. I also like how the characters were rather realistic. Jennifer was hesitant and really freaked out by the dream, and Will was doing all he could to try and comfort her. I could definitely see that happening in real life. Overall, this was well-written, I liked it and you based your story on the words perfectly. The details were nice, too.
You did a great job
