Melted Ice - Comments

kaylieeee (100)

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cries this was so perfect

November 24th, 2013 at 03:57pm

panicatthediscount (100)

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this was a cute story. I had a fun time reading c:

November 24th, 2013 at 02:49am

xxcarolineunoxx (100)

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I don't know I guess that it's kind of in second person and you can see it from both points of view with neither of them being the narrator. Don't worry about it though it's a wonderful story! :)

October 27th, 2013 at 04:09pm

Siren Piercer (100)

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@ xxcarolineunoxx
What confused you?

October 27th, 2013 at 09:04am

xxcarolineunoxx (100)

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Kinda confusing on how it's written but really good I love the story

October 26th, 2013 at 11:24pm

FunxMistakes (100)

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I was holding my breath while reading and at the end of the chapter i was like "HOLY FLYING FUCK! I can breathe now" Really I was expecting something bad so yeah...

October 26th, 2013 at 06:59pm

Ravena Phantomhive (100)

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SEQUEL PLEASE

October 24th, 2013 at 01:07am

xxcarolineunoxx (100)

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Oh yay update soon!! FUCKING SEQUAL PLEASE!!! ily!! <3

October 24th, 2013 at 01:02am

Readingforlife (100)

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I think there should be sequel if it ends badly.

October 24th, 2013 at 12:53am

Anne Ashes (100)

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You must do a sequel o.o and please don't kill any of them in the next chapters xD idk I kinda have a feeling

October 24th, 2013 at 12:23am

Siren Piercer (100)

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haha, yes it is :P
I really don't know tbh. Maybe, but.. idk. just maybe.

October 23rd, 2013 at 10:41pm

FunxMistakes (100)

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Jfc. Shit is so intense,!
Are you planning to write a sequel?

October 23rd, 2013 at 10:37pm

Anne Ashes (100)

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I really like it:3 update soon!

October 10th, 2013 at 05:31am

Readingforlife (100)

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Wow!! This is great. Can't wait for the next chapter..

September 29th, 2013 at 06:54am

kittens_and_scars (100)

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Yay another update its so cute how vic misses kellin and kellin being worried and how vic always thinks of kellin ugh my feels and I love the story its amazing I can't wait for the next one because I'm greedy and eager and I wantmore but your story is awesome=> can't wait for more^.^ ily♥♥♥♥

September 1st, 2013 at 09:00pm

kittens_and_scars (100)

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MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE. ITS SOOOO PERF♥

August 30th, 2013 at 07:28pm