Walking With Death - Comments

You're always welcome. Glad I could help :)

@ GoddessOfMischief16
Wow. Thank you so much. I've never got such a review as yours on this site before now. I'm literally speechless at what you've said. I'm glad you liked it and found my writing easy to read and understand. I, myself, have been close to people who've been suicidal and unfortunately have been suicidal myself. This was the product of that.
Thank you for the recommendation. It's very much appreciated.

This is one of the most powerful and gripping things I have read on this site in a long time...

I love the fact that it's short. It goes on for exactly the right amount of time, and it manages to answer all questions you have about the story, yet doesn't drag on for too long. You've balanced it just right. I've been very close to people that have been suicidal (all of whom shall remain anonymous) and I understand the points you've made in this story very well, as these people have told me the exact same things to my face. I have never been in a position such as this myself and I hope I never am, but through this I can get an idea of how it must feel, even if it is only a small one. You make your writing very easy to empathise with, and for that I congratulate you. Well done!

I have recommended your work, because I think it completely deserves it.