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  • Wolvie_Eatz_Katz

    Wolvie_Eatz_Katz (100)

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    I seem to type fast and forget alot of that, and when i go over it i don't notice a lot so thank you i will go over it again :)
    September 10th, 2013 at 02:23am
  • HiddenVeil

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    I like this because it's actually relatable and good. But as a whole it could use some editing like in the punctuation and grammar.
    September 3rd, 2013 at 01:31am
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