Hate to See Your Heart Break - Comments

I'm just really annoyed with Oli right now ya feel?

@ kickthepj
that sounds really cool tbh

ok ok so here's what you do, hook josh and Tom up bc tom hears all da sex and is p lonely and josh is too so they do they dates and stuff and one day tom gets home real late and oli's like bruhhhh where you been yo??? and toms been like hiding it for a while so he's finally jus like bruh I'm dating ur ex lol and then oli like v angrily goes to see josh and oli's like what is you doin with my brother u love me remember??? and josh is like ya but you fuckin dat hoe omg and they fight p hardcore and just lotsa lotsa screaming (bc I like arguing in fics oops is that weird) but then one cuts the other off and they have nice angry sexual things together and tom knew it would happen so he don't even care and then the story ends bc josh and oli get back together the end

They should pretend to date and fuck and stuff and make oli super jelly

ohmYGOD THEY COULD LIKE PRETEND TO BE TOGETHER TO MAKE OLI JELLY

At first I was completely against the whole Josh and Tom thing bc they should be friends and Im afraid it would just ruin everything between the three of them, but then I saw @ wishesinthedark 's comment and oddly enough I agree with her. It would be cute if Oli got all jealous bc yes cx oh and PLEASE UPDATE I LOVE THIS SO MUCH

I love u for updating I hate u for breaking my heart hAH THATS THE TITLE I DIDNT EVEN REALIZE THAT ok

it might be kinda cute if josh and tom get together for a small amount of time but Oli is all like NO and gets really jealous and wants josh back for himself :3

Update? I'm crying harder than I should be...

@ wishesinthedark
Don't cry! :( I haven't abandoned this, like I said I never would, just a little creative break or sth like that, next chapter should be up next weekend :)

DUDE please tell me you haven't abandoned this or anything cause if you have i might cry

DUDE please tell me you haven't abandoned this or anything cause if you have i might cry

DUDE please tell me you haven't abandoned this or anything cause if you have i might cry

Please write more soon I love this and I cried at the end of summertime sadness lol. PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!!!!!!!!

PLS PLS PLS PPLS PLS SSSSS UPDATE HGGHNNN WHUT R U DOING KEEPING US WAITING I LOVE YOUR STORIES AND OLI IS A WHORE ANDTN5RETWWGFRH

So done

OLI. DAFUQ U DOIN M8
OMG I HATE THE SUSPENSE

#no

That was sad. I'm sad. And I've went from being pissed off at Josh to wanting to stab Oli. I mean, come on how much of an ass can you get? Oli really has no room to talk anymore.
But on a happier note, this story is still amazing even though it's sad. I'm anticipating the next chapter. Veeery excited.

ok yes that was somewhat heartbreaking