Awakened - Comments

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO Oh crap I had a huge paragraph of comments but I noticed the link for her Harpers outfit and clicked it and lost my comment. UGH. Ok short version, I got your story off the comment swap. HIIIIIIIII I'm Glytchy, I like Harper and had to google who exactly the man was but omfg love the fact that his singing brought her back can I just swoon. Im not to loving the bestie Christie. THey seem so wildly different. I wish I had your grammar and punctuation skills cause dayum!

This isnt usually my type of reading material but so far I am liking it and Im glad I got paired with you and this story.

I love, love, love your style of writing OMG
The layout is a little flashy and I had to switch it to default because it hurt my eyes, but as far as grammar/spelling you're fantiastic!
I loved how you described things and the words you used were very well-placed.
Keep writing!

Here from Le comment swap.
Firstly, I like your layout, although when I started to read, it was hard on my eyes. You have a very clear plot for this, it was quite easy to read and it flowed well. I think this has huge potential. Your descriptions were good and your vocabulary too. Well done.