Collectively Unconsciously Composed - Comments, page 3

skinny love. (150)

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It's no problem at all :)
As for the newest chapter, yes it moves by fast so try your best to give more detail and slow it down. When you have writer's block it's best to just write a filler - and those are okay; they make the reader anticipate for more. If you ever have WB again, try writing a filler.

This was cute! xx

August 3rd, 2013 at 11:58pm

xomusic_luvxo (100)

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@ skinny love.
hey! I just wanted to say thank you for the advice on what to write in my chapters! it's really helpful

August 2nd, 2013 at 04:44am

skinny love. (150)

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You should definitely write another chapter! This is amazing, although I think the scene was a bit too dramatic and then adding Harry kissing her might have been too much for right then. But this is amazing so please continue!

August 2nd, 2013 at 01:12am

Colorful_dinos (100)

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I really love her quiet persona, usually all the stories just start with hers being all jumpy and a bit anoying. Please update soon!!

August 1st, 2013 at 08:12am

skinny love. (150)

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This seems like an interesting story. Just don't rush into a relationship between the two and put more detail into your chapters.
I am definitely subscribing !

July 31st, 2013 at 01:37am