Tampon - Comments

I am in love!

The summary was amazing and hilarious! Hahahhaaa I couldn't stop laughing because of the last line in the summary! This made me smile and I think Bruce has some feelings for her! ;)

You entered this in my Not-so-super Heroes Contest. :)

Oooh, saucy! The thought of big buff Bruce wandering aimlessly in a grocery store is enough to tickle me pink, but imagining him gazing helplessly at a rack of feminine hygiene products makes me laugh hysterically. It's classic. Superman tampon shopping is just genius; kudos to you for that one!

I do enjoy the tension you slipped in there between he and Diana. While the main conflict was obviously the fact that he had to go tampon shopping, I always like when an author adds side conflicts as well. It just shows your depth as a writer. (I liked that the woman who helped him had a crush on him too! side conflictssss!) Also, it's a classic pairing that I very much approve of. I can imagine Diana trying to schmooze Bruce into doing the favor for her and it makes me grin.

The dialogue was good, as were the descriptions. Your casual writing style mixed with your semi-formal vocabulary makes a good combo. It was easy to read and entertaining. The only thing I noticed were a few typos and spelling errors that I assume you just didn't catch when proof reading. However, I knew what you intended so I didn't mind.

This was very good. I enjoyed reading it. :) thanks for entering!

Omg, the image of Bruce Wayne going tampon shopping for Wonder Woman.. hilarious!! XD

This is good! :D

This was really cute and funny :)