His Little Obsession - Comments

omg I almost forgot about this story!!! I hope we get to see the re-write soon I love this story and cant wait to see it but way better !!!!

No josh pov. I think just Ricky and Viv would do it justice. I really like this story btw

Dick nugget made me laugh...but a re write would be cool.

Just as Kayla said we will not be continuing this story. And no she isn't supposed to work on the re-write but I'm pretty sure she'll help me on some of my updates every now and then. Add her own little touch. She will be what helps me with my character development! I am really looking forward to the re-write! I've already got tons of ideas for Ricky's character and I know that the re-write will be extravagant!

Let's clarify one point here: The rewrite means that, yes, this story will end. The entire point of the rewrite is to have a better story line and characters. It would be pointless to continue THIS story while the rewrite is happening.
The rewrite is going to be a better written story and there will be actual character development from all characters. Which this story does not have, which is why it took fifty entire chapters for Vivian to admit she loves Ricky. That shouldn't happen with proper character development.
I won't be writing for the new story (at least I am not a planned part of it) but I do have high hopes for it and I will be sitting by to make sure you all get the proper story you deserve. <3

I hope you do not plan to end this story if you do a rewrite! i love it and i think it works nicely! I guess ricky being more obsessive is part of who you want him to be but i prefer him in the way he is. but it is up to you :) great work xxx

This story is amazing!! I can't wait for more updates!!!

@ pinkpanther012895

@ Forever.In.Ink

@ piercethehotpockets

Not to worry, this is most certainly not the end!

FINALLY. WaIT. I hope it's not the end.. if it is I will cry.

FINALLY! YAY!
Although this could only mean troubles a coming… Wait yes? this isn't ending is it?

And I sincerly hope that that wasnt the end!

I hope that she finnally becomes well enough to be with Ricky.

DUUUDE NOOOOOO
I DONT LIKE THAT
NOPE NOPE NOPE
NON CONSNSUAL IS NON OK
WANTS SEXY RICKY TIME
EW Ronnie

Well. Damn.

Okay, I do not like this.
Vivi YOU SHOULD HAVE JUST TEXTED HIM OR CALLED, FOLLOW YOUR GUT FEELINGS! D:
Sorry .-. Update soon! c:

Oooooh so much drama! I hope things do start getting better from here on out

@ MusicIsMyLight
Thank-you. :)

@ xLadySparrow
Welcome to the family :3

oooo drama. and ricky doing drugs oooo

Being as I'm a new writer on board I just read the entire story and man...
I just don't get why y'all are Team Ricky. I would have beat that boys ass a long time ago. Boy needs help and I wanna beat his little ass for going to his dealer's house. Drugs don't solve anything.
Vivian has her own issues but really, kissing Ricky like that was fucked.
And Josh is an idiot for trusting Ricky. That just screams "I'm a jackass". (And now I write his parts? Ay yi yi.)