Tainted - Comments

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I'm not a very big One Direction fan, but I like the concept of the story. I like how I can feel the emotions in this and it is very well written. I like that there are two of you writing it because two minds can be better than one. I hope you keep up the good work ^_^

If anyone could make us an original banner, that would be amazing. We really need a new cover.
-shaylahhh (co-author)

@ ToastedMuffins15
Haha it's ok I am pretty sure you just hit reply for the first type you comment then hit reply on the other persons comment. and it should tag them in it as well.

And you are more than welcome :)

@ GalaxyDefend3r
I didn't know how to tag two people in a comment, so if look below at the comment I responded to from Z Loan, then you'll see that I noted you too :)

@ Z Loan
Thanks! I and the other author honestly thought that people had stopped reading completely, so in turn, we stopped writing completely. I have to say, you and GalaxyDefend3r are pretty awesome for your comments, and for that, we will write another chapter!

Hey, your story is amazing, I can't wait to read more. Spencer is too blinded to see the truth, she has made some big mistakes. <3 Please update.

Don't forget to updat the summary. It sill says her names something other than spencer. She should have listened to her dad about him being a bad guy. I have a feeling it's goig to go downhill really fast and she's not going to know what to do. Should be interesting to see how she reacts.

I really like the improvements! If you're going in a similar direction that you were before then I think this is a very good background story to accompany that (and if you're not, I look forward to seeing where it will go). A few minor grammar errors, but nothing major. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work :)

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To be honest I love this. I'm a big directioner and when this came up in the comment swap I was thrilled. I feel the emotions in the story. It's very well written. I see you've written it with another person which is also good. (: Well, I'm going to finish this up. Keep up the great work.

@ No problem! That is true, I just always feel a little bit awkward/nervous when giving it, since I'm worried sometimes it can be taken the wrong way. Keep up the good work though :)

@ canadianrose
Thanks for the comment. Finally someone from the comment swap! There is two of us, to answer your question. Personally, I don't think the comment was bias at all. It really inspired us, you could say. Constructive criticism is always the best, because of its insight to the story. So thanks, again :)

I was brought here via comment swap. To be honest, I'm not a One Direction fan, which unfortunately probably biased me to your story (I'm sorry). I found that there were a few oddities with your story - such as to why Rose was living with Derek, especially with the way he treated her, why did she feel like she was stuck in this relationship? I didn't see anything crazy that seemed to be holding her back, from what I got she didn't even appear to think she was in love with him (I may be wrong, but that's how I felt) and I feel like with Derek's aggressive behaviour... it would have sadly escalated quickly and I feel like he wouldn't have been that patient with her in regards to sex. Then again, maybe I just haven't read far enough into the story for you to have fleshed out those details, if that's true, I apologize. A quick tip that was given to me: if you're going to have alternating POVs, then try to switch them in between chapters, it makes it less messy and easy for the readers. You (two?) are good writers and I wish you the best of luck!

Your last message inspired us, so we put the original chapter 5 behind us :). So chapter 6 should be up quick!

Your last message inspired us, so we put the original chapter 5 behind us :). So chapter 6 should be quick!

Writing a new chapter as we speak!

Please update soon!

Update soon! I really want to know what happens when Derek and Rose get home! And thank you for mentioning me!

Update soon! I really want to know what happens when Derek and Rose get home! And thank you for mentioning me!

Thank you for the first comment! And we'll make sure to write a really fast update just for you!

Please update soon!