The Sun and the Moon - Comments

  • helena_88

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    i just read through those two before this one and now just read the last chapter of this and i just absolutely love all three.. that you made it so he was supposed to stop everything from happening in New York but Thor and Tony f*cked that up.. yep.. just awesome and I really really hope that you'll update this soon XD
    April 21st, 2014 at 06:42pm
  • Queen of the Clouds

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    That ending was cute. At the start of the chapter I was worried, fearing they'd never be the same because too much had changed. But I'm glad he's still the Loki she wants, and hopefully he's good enough for her son too.
    September 4th, 2013 at 12:06pm
  • January Rose

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    Okay, I have finally caught up!! Dance I'm glad to see that Loki and Nina are slowly repairing their relationship, even though it has quite a few bumps. Great last few chapters and I look forward to reading more! Cute
    August 24th, 2013 at 07:29pm
  • Doku_Fate

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    I cant wait for the next chapter
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    August 19th, 2013 at 11:30pm
  • Queen of the Clouds

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    Great updates! Excited to read more, as always! Cute
    August 19th, 2013 at 06:44am
  • Chloe Gray

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    My feels!!! *clutches chest*
    August 18th, 2013 at 02:43am
  • Under.An.Eclipse

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    Ohhhh! I wonder how she will handle this. :) Great chapter. I'm excited for the next chapter. ^_^
    August 15th, 2013 at 04:34am
  • Chloe Gray

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    You're excited? I'm excited! And I absolutely love this :)
    August 14th, 2013 at 05:35pm
  • Queen of the Clouds

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    Oh gosh, I hope her and Thor can work things out. Take your time outlining and planning the story so it's just right Cute
    August 12th, 2013 at 12:31am
  • Chloe Gray

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    Poor Loki! I hope he still of a sound mind.. I am so anxious to see how this turns out. Fabulous updates!
    August 10th, 2013 at 06:35pm
  • Queen of the Clouds

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    Firstly, loving the layout Cute They were good starting chapters. I'm really interested in seeing what happens next, so I hope you update soon! Cute
    August 6th, 2013 at 04:18am
  • January Rose

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    Oh my gosh, poor Loki. Even though he is a criminal and deserved to be in jail, he didn't deserve to be starved and beaten! And poor Nina, seeing the person she loves the most so broken. At least she was strong for him.
    But I wonder how Loki is going to react. Hopefully in a positive way.
    August 5th, 2013 at 11:07pm
  • KillJoySynner

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    Aww!! Poor Loki!;-; loved it and Aiden! God he's adorable!:D
    August 5th, 2013 at 08:07am
  • January Rose

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    This story is off to a really great start. I already love Aiden and how cute he is! (Thanks for the picture btw) It's just sad that Loki never knew he even has a kid and that he never got to meet him.
    August 4th, 2013 at 05:21pm
  • Chloe Gray

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    Oh.. That is just so heartbreaking.. I am really looking forward to see how this progresses. And just a quick correction, and the only one that I saw, when you are talking about Aiden reading in the tree: he was now* reading it... And however the rest of the line went. Just something small I noticed :) Gah! I'm so excited.
    August 1st, 2013 at 06:13am