No Really, I'm Fine - Comments

I really like the story , you've got good characters and a nice plot. But , it seems to be going a little to fast and add some more details. It'll make the story much better for your readers and for you , as well.

@Shadowwolf23
I'm going to update it as soon as I finish downloading some music. I may go through and update some of the older chapters too.

@ ABlackGinger
No problem! Just helping a fellow writer out! c:

@ Shadowwolf23
Thanks dear! I'll be sure to work on that! :)

Here's a suggestion, more detail honey. It'll make the story chapters, not only longer for your readers, but better also. You have a very good plot and character, you just need more detail. Describe more, also don't repeat things. Just some advice!

@ scissorhandsmiw
I was going to add the next chapter last night but I thought I'd leave you guys with something to get you pumped about what comes next! :)

i love this! please update! :)

@ ABlackGinger
Yay! :P

@ Azalele7
I am right now!

I really like this story so far,please update soon! :)