Recovery. - Comments

One Direction is my absolute favorite! I think Elzabeth's back story is really different and I like that about her. I like how she was born with a silver spoon in her mouth instead of the typical girl with a bad home life and a drunk father and an absent mother and no friends or anything. It was a nice twist from the usual and I think that was my favorite part about the story so far. Elizabeth wasn’t a boring character and that made the whole thing a lot more interesting. I do think the abuse thing is a little cliché, but other than that it was good!

COMMENT SWAP! ok first off, i don't liek one direction but idrc cuz i'm still upset over the fans of them bc of what they did and said. but anywho, I really enjoy your writing. i feel like you have amazing word choice and i love how you mentions Vans<3 love Vans! keep writing:)

sorry my sis just hacked while i was away

smile guys its a brand new day

Comment swap! i personally don't LOVE 1D but this fan-fiction was pretty awesome. I love this story and i look forward to seeing the end

I love this sooo much! It reminds me a lot of what I went through when I was 16. :( I can't wait to see more of what you do with it.

Comment swap!!! I'm glad I got a story that is a One Direction fan-fiction. I love how there's a different story to Harry, Liam, and especially Niall. I believe I was intrigued by Niall's character the most. The way he had reacted when he saw Elizabeth's blood was very odd but I'm hoping to learn more about it. You've got a subscriber!

Comment Swamp :)
YAY First commenter. Honestly, I'm not a fan of One Direction but I have nothing against those who are. However, I like how this isn't- so far -about the actual band, you've just taken the members as you're characters. Even though this isn't what I would normally read and I've only read the first two chapters, I really like the plot and feel I can relate to Elizabeth quite a lot -except that she's really rich.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammar issues, but I am literally the worst for that so I probably wouldn't notice if there was any. Keep going with this it, your a really good writer and i'd like to see where you take this.