I Hate You; I Love You Too - Comments

Your welcome!!! (also if you can't find anyone I'll gladly edit it for you since I was the one who pointed it out).

@ shelia
Thanks a lot for the comment. Whenever writing your own story, you tend to miss your own mistakes . So I will definitely go over it again and maybe even have someone edit it for me to find what I could not :) I appreciate the feedback!

Your story is interesting, glancing at the title makes me wonder what it's about as I had begun reading. As I begun reading I soon discovered that Dakota and Aiden appear to be real jerks! I would've been extremely annoyed with the two. (On a small and brief side note I did notice a few spelling/grammar errors that I would like to alert you of).

And oh great...they transferred into the class with them, can't wait to see where this is going...I would be enraged that I would have to spend the whole time with the enemy...actually I've already done it...surrounded by them for three years, not a single friend in the class...the occurrence never really does leave the head.

Anyway the writing looks quite interesting and holds a lot of promise!