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  • MrsDCriss589

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    Crazy but amazing as always
    December 26th, 2013 at 09:17am
  • airplanes__

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    Ahhhhh so Jordan's dead... yeeeesh! I'm sensing a whole bunch of legal problems coming Kaley's way! :(
    December 26th, 2013 at 12:27am
  • BrokenWings07070409

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    I love your stories. they are amazing.
    November 5th, 2013 at 06:00pm
  • Kdmcarlos

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    Where have you beeeen?!!!!
    October 6th, 2013 at 09:59pm
  • RedRose32

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    Ok so my internet was down and I've FINALLY got it back up read the first chapter and I've gotta say I LOVE how you've wrote this I mean you've REALLY captured how Darren was feeling and how he could leave her side and didn't care what the paparazzi was thinking you captured everything REALLY well and I'm glad that Kaley woke up :) Good Job and keep up the AWESOME work
    September 12th, 2013 at 01:01am
  • luvergurl010

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    YAY YAY YAY SOOOOOO GOOOD
    cant wait for the next chapter
    August 16th, 2013 at 05:43am
  • Annabelle Graceton

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    @ airplanes__
    I hate the layouts on these things cause trying to fix them to how you want is so frustrating. And thanks for noticing that! My other fanfics are all in third person so I get the views mixed up sometimes. Thanks! I'll try to fix those as soon as I can :)

    And I'm so stoked that your so stoked! :D and don't we all wish that? *le sigh* <3
    August 3rd, 2013 at 05:50am
  • airplanes__

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    Hey girl, so the first thing I noticed was that the story layout runs REALLLLLY wide and I have to scroll just to read a single sentence fully. Maybe fix that? Another thing I noticed while reading was that you went from using the first person point of view (Darren narrating using "I") to using the third person point of view ("He wanted to tell them to screw off") and then back to "I". Not sure if this was done intentionally but it came off as though Darren was narrating one second and then the author jumping in the next :P

    OVERALL, I AM SO STOKED FOR THIS STORY. Slightly depressed, I'll admit, because I want to be woken up by a hot man singing me the Script but it's never gonna happen, but yknow, other than that I LOVED IT. Can't wait to see what happens next :)
    August 3rd, 2013 at 12:39am
  • Raniagleek

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    Yaaaay finally <3 so excited for it
    August 2nd, 2013 at 08:50pm
  • verypotter26

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    This is absolutely amazing, so is If Only You Knew. You should be so proud of yourself, I literally spent all day reading this yesterday and I finished it, and I was speechless. Bravo, I can't wait for another chapter! :)
    August 2nd, 2013 at 07:27pm
  • lizbagley

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    OMG I...I...okay you've rendered me speechless...whimpers, more soon...please
    August 2nd, 2013 at 07:36am
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