August 4th, 2013 at 02:28am
@ Rose Tyler.
Thanks doll.
I'll try working on a layout this week. I've tried but it has trouble registering the picture I want as the banner
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August 4th, 2013 at 02:26am
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@ Shirrin
oh sweet. Jess is my.... I guess i'll just say shes my character. Her personality Is mine.August 3rd, 2013 at 05:24am -
Okay that's kinda scary. When you described Jess, I saw me. Physically at least. All she needs is glasses.
As for the writing itself, it seems pretty mundane. But then this is only the first two chapters. Also, no one I know personally speaks perfect English.
Let's see where this goes.August 2nd, 2013 at 11:48pm -
Because the layout is so wide-set, it made it really hard for me to focus having grown accustomed to original layouts and non-page-cross text on most websites. I'd definitely love to see some layout work on this! (Also, page dividers might be a better idea that ~~~~~~ all the time) Overall, it seems like a very interesting story.August 2nd, 2013 at 09:13pm
Thanks!
I know what you mean about the writting being pretty mundane. I've tried writing more poetic but this was just mainly a fun story we wanted to write together!!! And as you pointed out its only the first two chapters! I hope you'll wanna read more once more is posted!!