Must Be Normal - Comments

@ Don'tFearTheReaper
Glad it did lol :)

@ Tipsy Returns
aw shucks, thank you. that just made my morning

This was fabulous. (:

@ XXXataktoulaXXX
thank you. i got all bubbly reading this critique. i get what you mean. you're comments really are going to help me get better!

Layout:
This one is fantastic and the transparent banner is even better. I adore this one. Well done!

Summary:
The summary is intense and the short sentences make a great impact on the reader's mind. You know when to write short and when long, and that really worked to your advantage. I suggest putting a dot to the last sentence which you forgot, and instead of writing Worse than before, I believe Worse than ever before. would flow better.

Chapter 1/1:

But the label is a sadistic way to make others feel belittled.
Well said!

This is where she finds herself. The lowest of the low.
You have quite a good way with words, this is one of my favorite lines in this piece.

I liked the flow throught out the whole piece. You kept each paragraph connected to the next one in unique way which brought the best out of this drabble.

There is no comparison to her mind.
This really makes you think about how the narrator actually felt, and the way this sentence matche dthe rest (the ending) was nice.

But for once in her life, she wishes she fit the “normal” definition. She doesn’t want the burden everyone gives her for being human. A human not fitting their standards.
You killed me.

I love this piece. Great job!

-Marian.

This could totally work as a completely separate story from the first one, but also as a sequel too. It left me with chills and I can not believe how talented you are. This layout was beautiful and dark and haunting, much like the story itself. Wow.