500 Days - Comments

Just found this and I'm in love with it!!! Absolutely adorable!!

Sorry I'm just getting around to this, I got distracted by criminal minds.

I read the first two chapters, and I have to say that I like this story a lot better than I liked Stay With Me. I like this more because the imagery that you do in this is beautiful. I mean, you caught my attention from the first line. I love the fact that you keep your readers guessing by not fully explaining what is going on right way, but you make us feel like we're in the moment.

Here to deliver your Wonderball!

I like this! And that means something since I usually don't read 1D fictions. I love Aria's character and Stephanie's, too. Their friendship seems very realistic. I think the flow of the words is very smooth and easy to follow, and I loved how it explained how Louis and Aria felt in their first two chapters. It made me nervous for them, haha!

If I may, I noticed that the first chapter had some grammatical errors, mostly comma usage, but other than that it's very well written and enjoyable!

Keep up the great work! I'll be recc'ing and subscribing!

This is really good!

So excited for this!